dimecres, 22 d’octubre del 2014

Biel Pla (correction)


Twice a week I have football training with Les Preses team. And once a week we play a match with other teams. Once a week I go to music classes and I play the piano and sing two hours. Once a week, I study in private classes and I often practice maths. I always go to school less saturday and sunday, I love do this.

And: It isn't necessary.
once a week: a lot of repetitions.
Class(es): it is singular, not plural.
in: it isn't correct.
do: it isn't necessary.
have football training: I think the correct is: I training football

dilluns, 20 d’octubre del 2014

 
MY HABITS
 
Hi, my name is Jordi, I'm entraining two day of the weekend and the saturday, often sunday play the match. Always I'm go hunting with my father and my dog Black, often meet with my friends:
Jordi Puig, Marc Carola, Joel Fageda...
And the wednesday I go to the Joana's class for learn english, I go with :
Marc Carola, Alba Fajula, Biel Pla and Mireia Comajoan.